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| <img>http://www.of-nutrition.com/images/book.jpg</img> Hi, my name is Rebecca. I'm new here, and was hoping to get some feedback from the health & weight loss pros! I have been hired to make a weight loss - themed website, selling only one particular ebook. I must admit, the book is excellent, but I'm having serious trouble writing a persuasive sales copy, that health and weight loss-oriented website visitors would find convincing enough to make a purchase. Thus, my request- would you be willing to help me to evaluate the sales letter I've written so far? Your help would be tremendously appreciated! I cannot pay you for that, but I can offer you a comlimentary copy of 76 No-Sugar Desserts, containing delicious stevia recipes and valued at $15, just for 2 minutes of your attention! First: go to Of-Nutrition.com and read the entire sales letter for Weight Loss Cover-Up Exposed Then go to my 10-question (yes/no) survey at http://www.screator.net/showform.php?f=1917565430 Survey Access Code is: wlcu When you finish the survey, a link to the bonus will show up. Hoping to get a helping hand here. Thankful - Rebecca Dear Mods: If this is the wrong section of forum please move if required |